but let those broken dreams be mine

Posted: November 24, 2011 in Stanzas

Over countless cups of coffee, insignificant though it may seem,
As I listened to you, your stories; I weaved a lot of dreams
When you took those stories away, I did not whine
But let those broken dreams be mine.

In summer nights, as we sat in the field having ice-cream,
Staring at the stars, together; I weaved a lot of dreams
I am okay with the stars having lost their shine
But let those broken dreams be mine.

Those crazy nights, when the glasses were filled to the brim,
Drunk in your arms, drowsy; I weaved a lot of dreams
I do not crave for your embrace, or the wine
But let those broken dreams be mine.

When you said you have something to say and it was grim
I shut myself, my ears; but I could not help my dreams
You said you have to go, I replied, ”It is fine”
But please, let those broken dreams be mine.

 

“This post is an entry at Blogjunta Dreams Contest to be judged by Jyoti Arora, author of Dream’s Sake”

Comments
  1. saket says:

    wow! it’s beautiful and rhyming at the same time. wow again

  2. vikas pathak says:

    whoa!is it you,sir?thats how you define versatility.
    alfaaz bilkul shayrana hain.khayal bhi ekdum romantic.

    ‘But let those broken dreams be mine’,what a painful-yet-so-sweet refrain!
    completely moved.truly poetic.

  3. I feel its incomplete..wanted a little more..

  4. abhrajeet says:

    gajab hai SP saab !!
    and wo ek stanza does make ti feel complete . :)

  5. Tinytoes says:

    Whoa… Its such a beautiful poem and i love the second ending a lot though :)

  6. Amrita says:

    Beautiful Poem…!!!!I liked the first part more….incomplete ones is a reality…

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